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Tuesday 28 June 2016

Carrot cake is healthy? by Angelina


Learning Intention: write a persuasive writing.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I can write a persuasive writing to persuade that carrot cake is not healthy.

I dis agree that carrot cake is healthy because, it is big and sweet.Carrot cake may make you sick if you eat too much. It has too much sugar that will make your blood high and teeth rotten.The carrot cake might make you high and make you crazy.The cake itself is big. Carrot cake maybe tasty and nice, but is not good for you.It will make you fat.

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