I am a Year 5 student at Saint Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teacher is Miss Chao.
Friday, 3 November 2017
The haunted house is really bone-chilling!
The haunted house looks frightening and horrifying. It feels sinister, bone-chilling and spine-tingly. The haunted house is shadowy as if something is going to jump out. It smells damp and dusty. The haunted house is very quiet.
Learning Intention: We are learning to write a description.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I use descriptive sentences to describe the haunted house.
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writing
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