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Wednesday 11 May 2016

Learning.Intention. W.A.L.T-write a narrative story.
Success Criteria: I know I do this when I can write a narrative story using describing words.                       Magic Horse

Last night, I was playing in my room and I didn't know that a little magic rocking horse came in through my open window. As I was about to put away my tablet, I saw it on the floor so, I gently picked it up. It was very small.To my surprise, the magic horse suddenly became big like a normal horse. "I have magic powers and I can take you anywhere you want to go.", said the magic horse. "Mmm... I think I would like to go somewhere with my family but give me a minute to think of a beautiful place to take them to", came my reply.

The magic horse asked me again, "Where do you want to go?" "I wanted to go to Australia", I replied.  So we went to Australia and we had lots of fun there. We stayed with my aunty for a year.It was cool to see my aunty and meet my cousins for the first time. We had parties to celebrate special occasions . 

When the year ended, the magic horse took us back home to New Zealand then it eventually flew back to its kingdom in the magical land of the  pixie horses.

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